Changing the sequnce ( Ending)

For my group's media sequence, obviously parts of clips needed to be changed. The changes were:

• Show girl walking in a confined space
• Show girls headphones wrapped around phone on the floor
• Show a close up of text message

We wanted to improve our sequence by showing the vulnerable girl ( Hollie) in a confined space. This shows that as Hollie is walking in a confined space, and being followed by the Stalker, there is n escape as she is in a enclosed area, therefore this makes Hollie's character more vulnerable, as Hollie's character will not be able to run away, as her " backs against the wall"

Furthermore at the end of the sequence you see the girls headphones wrapped around her phone on the floor. The headphones wrapped around the girls phone portrays that Hollie's character is the phone and the headphones represent that she cannot break free of the situation she is in. Her phone is on the ground, as this alludes that something has happened to the girl so it leaves you on a cliff hanger. 

Also when the text message is shown on the girls phone, it was unclear what the text message said. Therefore my group re- filmed the image of the text message so it clearly shows the girls text message on her phone from her mum. This shows the mums concern in why she isn't home yet.